One more thing (and I'm kind of laughing on this point)

I think this is the point where we find out that the hero named his...um...particular appendage and also figures out that the heroine's a virgin.
I'm taking bets on how long it is before he freaks out.
Never mind...too soon. Too soon, man.
I'll have an interesting review to write on this one. I just, I think this might be worse than some of the P2P fanfic erotica that I've read and have made me bang my head against the wall for measure.