About 60% done

Holding Back - Mila Kerr

I should be finished soon, but my biggest gripes with this work so far:


*Too much sex for the length of the story

*One of the characters questions her sexuality, but it's not really done in a way that's outside of the frame of telling these details, nor is it all that realistic.  Makes it hard to connect with the characters.

*Shallow plotline (not really much of one) and character development is lacking

*Jealousy games don't really make sense.


I'm following it to the end, but it's probably going to end up around 1.5 stars unless something changes.