I should be finished soon, but my biggest gripes with this work so far:
*Too much sex for the length of the story
*One of the characters questions her sexuality, but it's not really done in a way that's outside of the frame of telling these details, nor is it all that realistic. Makes it hard to connect with the characters.
*Shallow plotline (not really much of one) and character development is lacking
*Jealousy games don't really make sense.
I'm following it to the end, but it's probably going to end up around 1.5 stars unless something changes.